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提问者网友：最爱你的唇
2021-07-20 22:03

My collection

I have a great poster collection. It's I spent a long time collection.

I have with regard to Michael Jordan posters. They're very nice. I very like them. And I have many with regard to Beckham posters. He playing soccer ball is very handsome.So many with regard to him posters on wall in my bedromm.

I like these posters,do you like posters? Let's collect posters!It's very interesting.

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五星知识达人网友：玩世
2021-07-20 22:26

My collection

I have many poster collection which spent lot of time being collecting.

I have collected posters about Michael Jordan .They're very nice. I like them very much.And i have collected posters about Beckham who is so handsome to play football on the wall in my bedroom.

I like these posters,and what about you?Let's collect posters together.It is very interesting.

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1楼网友：上分大魔王
2021-07-20 22:45

My collection

I have a lot of poster collection which i spent a long time to collect.

I have been collecting posters about Michael Jordan.The posters are very nice. l like them a llt. I have also been collecting posters about Beckham playing soccer on the wall in my bedroom as think he is very handsome while playing soccer. I like to collect posters,what about you? Collecting poster is something very fun,let's collect it together.

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