谁帮忙写英语作文，我写了，你验证对不？

谁帮忙写英语作文，我写了，你验证对不？

My life was a boring summer at home every day to prepare the next junior high school learning, and occasionally play with the computer while away their time every day to stay at home. I hate the summer remedial yes, the only fortunate that the holiday does not work. Not long ago, organized a military training school, so that our new students, awareness of the soldiers, tempered the will, this is my summer life, only more fun. Rest of the time, I might choose to sleep, though every day I get up early, go to bed very early on, but I think sleep is a kind of enjoyment.
Speaking of our military training, so I have lots to talk about the case, would have some complaints, will do miss those days. When we all sleep together, we will each rushing to the quilt; as instructors blame punish us, we will whisper in private. Although this period of time really flies, but I will always remember it in my mind.
After military training, I feel that the friendship between our students will become increasingly dark.

我的暑假生活十分的无聊，每天在家准备接下来的初中学习，偶尔玩玩电脑消磨时间，每天都呆在家里。暑假补课是我最讨厌的，唯一庆幸的是假期没有作业。前不久，中学组织了军训，让我们这些新学子，认知了军人，锻炼了意志，这是我的暑假生活中唯一比较好玩的。其余时间，我可能会选择睡觉，虽然我每天起床很早，睡觉也很早，但是我认为睡觉是一种享受。
说起我们的军训，我就有说不完的话，会有些抱怨，会有些怀念。当我们大家都在一起睡觉时，会互相抢着被子；当教官责备惩罚着我们时，会在私下小声嘀咕。虽说这段时间过得很快，但是我却会在脑海里一直记着它。
经过了军训，我觉得我们同学之间的友谊会越来越深。