英语高手进拉~~~~

英语高手进拉~~~~

英语高手进拉~~~~
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我参加学校的英语口语比赛，写了篇稿子，希望大家帮忙给我找错，另外还有不地道的说法，也希望大家给纠正！！谢谢 Fly up high
I want to fly up high, so let the knowledge be my wings, let the brave heart be my power
Fly up high in the morning, when others are still asleep,I can’t wait to run out of my
dormitory to take a deep breath.I just can’t waste the fresh air.What I wanna do is running r
ight away.It’s a wonderful feeling that the sweat flowing down from my forehead额头，then,I’ll fin
d a bench in the small forest,read a nice优美的 article that I like.When the sun rises,sunshine go-
es through the forest and on my shoulders,which makes me feel that I own the sunshine. A morning
just has an end when I step the shadow of the trees.
Fly up high in the afternoon,instead of facing the screen of computer, I am carried away by all the wonderful books in
The library.I want to read Bill Gates,not for his endless wealth he earns,but for his way to
Success.I want to read Hiltler希特勒，not for the crimes that he committed,but for his heart 不好写了。
I want to read Lu Xun,not for his good reputation,but for using words as
Weapons.I read them,also read me.I learn that some things I should do or not.Then,an after-
Noon is over when I fell in my thinking.
Fly up high in the evening,I’ll give my parents a call.To tell them I am all right.And I
Will tell myself I must be strong.Let both the wings and heart be stong.I’ll try my best to
Protect them as they have done for me.
Fly up high all day,all year,and all my life.

你写得很好.我改了一小点.不知你最后愿意加上这句?Fly up high ...
and I will touch the sky!

预祝你比赛成功！Don't be nervous,because it's not a big deal^^
1.when others are still in sleep(When others are still asleep)
2.I just can’t waste the fresh air(I just don't want to waste the fresh air更好一点)
3.It’s a wonderful feeling that the sweat flowing down from my 额头
(It's wonderful to feel the sweat rolling down my forehead)
4.A morning just has an end(A morning just passed like this)
5.instead of facing the screen of computer,I lose myself in
The library(instead of sitting in front of the computer, I indulge myself in the books)
6.not for his endless wealth he earn(not for his ample wealth)
7.not for the crimes that he made,but for his heart 不好写了(not for the crimes that he had made,but for his ambition--not the ambition of conquering the world of human beings but the world of knowledge)
8.but for the words that how can be used as
Weapons (but for how to use words as swords)
9.I learn that some things I should do or not (I learn the things I should do and others not)
10.I’ll try my best to protect them as they have done for me (I'll try my best to protect them for rewarding what they have done for me)

第二行的I can’t wait 的说法不太地道，建议用too impatient to wait—（迫不及待）。

额头：forehead
优美的：dainty
踩过：step on
希特勒：Hitler