帮忙看看英语作文有什么语法错误的地方.

帮忙看看英语作文有什么语法错误的地方.
We are going to visit the British Museum tomorrow.我们约好早上8点在校门口集合,and we will go there on foot.When we get to the museum ,we must obey the rules of the museum.For example,we can't touch the exhibits with our hands,and we make noise there.I hope you can follow above.
certainly,we can find a lot of information with the help of computer there.When we are visiting ,we need to observe the exhibits carefully,we need to take our pen and notebook to note the interesting things there and 下周一交一份关于参观的报告.
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第一段倒数第二行应该是 we can't make ..

1.We are going to visit the British Museum tomorrow.我们约好早上8点在校门口集合,and we will go there on foot.
评语：语法错误.这件事是属于已过去式的,所以应该用（past tense).
更正：Yesterday,we'd paid a visit to the British Museum.After gathering outside the school gate at around eight in the morning,we started to walk to our destination.
2.When we get to the museum ,we must obey the rules of the museum.
更正：When we (entered) the museum ,we must obey the rules of the museum.
3.For example,we can't touch the exhibits with our hands,and we make noise there.I hope you can follow above.
建议：For example,we are not allowed to touch the exhibits with our bare hands and we have to be silenced in the museum.
4.When we are visiting ,we need to observe the exhibits carefully,we need to take our pen and notebook to note the interesting things there and 下周一交一份关于参观的报告.
建议：While visiting,we were ordered to observe the exhibits carefully and then jot down all related information which is useful for us in producing a quality work of the visiting reports
that required to hand by next Monday.
大致上没有太多的错误.只是句子上的结构而以.加油!