英语翻译我的第一故乡是重庆,是个人口密度很大的城市.这是出生的地方,有我幼小的童年`小学`初中.接下来我想讲我的第二故乡

英语翻译
我的第一故乡是重庆,是个人口密度很大的城市.这是出生的地方,有我幼小的童年`小学`初中.接下来我想讲我的第二故乡,广西北海,很漂亮的海滨旅游城市,银滩白白的沙滩,每年世界各地的游客都来这里冲浪,有着美国夏威夷美称.涠洲岛是中国最年轻的活火山.海鲜产品也是北海的特色.还有海底世界,都是北海特色..欢迎来北海
主要就是介绍故乡 欢迎添加一些增润的内容..
其实 我的文本给的不很通顺...但是1楼翻的的确有待改进啊...

I have two hometowns,the first one is Chongqing -- it is the place where i was born and i spent my childhood there.Now i would like to introduce my second hometown--Beihai in Guangxi province.It is a beautiful seaside city,there are snow white beaches and each year there will be thousands of tourists from all around the world come here to surf.It is known as the Chinese Hawaii.The Weizhou Island here is the youngest active volcano in China.What's more,there are also delicious seafood and interesting underwater world waiting for you.Welcome to Beihai!