以“save our fat children”为题的英语短文

Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet.how to saye our fat children? Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They become the leading numbers who go on a diet.
　However, dieting might  bring great negative effects on people. For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting  not only is useless but also might damage their health. For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.
　　Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. In my opinion, dieting for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. Only with right guidance can dieting work  as we expect.