改英文文章文法1.I never raise a hand before in my class to ask the

改英文文章文法
1.I never raise a hand before in my class to ask the teachers 's problem,but now,i will
do it.I think this is no only for my mark and impression,also is a train. learnings will
change the people attitude and habit. In the free time,i will go to the library to lend
english book;study mathematical everyday;practice the PE item.I will continue and
try my best. I believe that it must be helpful for me.Also I will arrange my schedule
suitable,because I need has a good body to cope my studies.
2.My friends already are the Form 5 students,my friends,who also motivate me,work
hard everyday.In the future,I would be thinkful to myself as i put great effort today.
是帮我修改英文文法,不是翻译喔~
They word hard everyday,my friends also motivate me
改成adjective clause系
my friends,who also motivate me,work hard everyday.
有冇错呢?
如果上面文章中有句子可以转成adjective clause也帮帮我吧~

1.I (加 have) never raise a hand before in my class to ask the teachers ('s 改为 about my) problem(s),but now,(i will do it 改为 I do).I think this is (no 改为 not) only for my mark(s) and impression,also is a (train 改为 practice).Learnings will change (去掉the) people (是 people's) attitude and habit(s).In (the 应改为 my) free time,I will go to the library to (lend 是借出,借入要用 borrow) English book; study (mathematical 是 mathematics) every day; practice the PE item.I will continue and try my best.I believe that it (must 改为 would) be helpful for me.Also I will arrange my schedule (suitable 是 suitably),because I need (has 改为 to have) a good body to cope (加 with) my studies.
2.My friends already are(去掉 the) Form 5 students,(去掉 my friends,)who also motivate me (,work 改为 to work) hard every day.In the future,I would be thankful to myself as I (加 have) put (加 in) great effort(s) today.
问题补充：
my friends,who also motivate me (,改为 to) work hard every day.
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