Dear editor：
I like traveling very much.Last year,I with my family went to JiNan by plane.That city was very beautiful.One of those places was my favorite.It was BaoTuquan.The river was very clean and there were many kinds of plants at there.We took many photos and we also bought some postcards.We felt so happy that didn't want to leave there .I liked there very much.We stayed there a month.We very enjoy that trip.
这个文估计错误很多...但恳请英语高手修改一下其中的语法错误，或者单词错误，麻烦快一点谢谢~~
Dear editor,
I like traveling very much.Last year,I went to JiNan by plane with my family .That city is very beautiful.One of the places there called BaoTuquan is my favorite.The river is very clean and there are many kinds of plants there.We took many photos and we also bought some postcards.We felt so happy that we didn't want to leave.I like JiNan very much.We stayed there a month.We enjoy that trip.
Yours,
XX
此篇文章语句很简单，很难修改，在没有语法错误的情况下只能这样改，否则要大篇幅的修改。象第二句话，就可以写成Last year, I flew to JiNan with my family. there不是乱用的，且前面无需介词，跟HOME是一样的。