英语改错，帮帮忙哪

（一）My friend Lucy gave me a ticket for an excited film which i want to see it very much.However,I will have to take an examination tomorrow.Ibelieve that only when you do that you should do can you make progresses in life.In my opinion,it is waste of time going to see that film right now.That's why i decided to give up seeing the film with him and working hard at my lessons.Lucy felt this a great pity that i could't see the film with her.To make her happily,I said,"why not going to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?"
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street.At first, I think he was just riding a bike for funs like other tourists in our city.However,I soon learned tow years later he had left his job but began his world bicycle tour.The foreigner,in his opinion the best way to see the world is by bicycle,saying he planned to spend two months touring China."China,"he said,"is a country with long history.All the prople I've met there are friendly."I showed him around the city whole afternoon.Though tiring,I was very happy to have such a good chance to practise my speaking English.

（一）7a686964616fe78988e69d8331333264633435My friend Lucy give me a ticket for an excitng film which I want to see it 删very much.However,I will have to take an examination tomorrow.I believe that only when you do that you should do you can make progress in life.In my opinion,it is waste of time going删 to see that film right now.That's why i decide to give up seeing the film with him and working hard at my lessons.Lucy fells it a great pity that I could't see the film with her.To make her happy,I say,"why not going to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?"
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street.At first, I thought he was just riding a bike for fun like other tourists in our city.However,I soon learned tow years later he had left his job but began his world bicycle tour.The foreigner,in his opinion the best way to see the world is by bicycle. He said he planned to spend two months touring China."China,"he said,"is a country has long history.All the people I've met there删 are friendly.I showed him around the city whole afternoon.Though tiring,I was very happy to have such a good chance to practise my speaking English.
帮你全部改了一遍，因为改后的注释颜色看不到，你自己认真对照一下！

（一）7a686964616fe78988e69d8331333264633437My friend Lucy gave me a ticket for an exciting film which I want to see very much. However, I will take an examination tomorrow. I believe that only when you do what you should do can you make progress in life. In my opinion, it is a waste of time to go to see that film right now. That's why I decided to give up going to see the film with her and work hard at my lessons. Lucy felt it is a great pity that I couldn’t go to see the film with her. To make her happy, I said, "why not go to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?" （二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street. At first, I thought he was just riding on a bike for funs like other tourists in our city. However, I soon learned that two years ago he had left his job and began his world bicycle tour. The foreigner, in whose opinion the best way to look at the world is by bicycle, said that he planned spending two months to tour in China. "China, "he said," is a country with long history. All the people I've met here are friendly”. I showed for him around the city the whole afternoon. Though tired, I am very happy having such a good chance to practice my Speaking-English.

一32313133353236313431303231363533e59b9ee7ad9431333264633435 1will have to take an examination -->will take an examination 2only when you do that you should do can you make progresses in life--> only when you do something you should can make progresses in your life 3it is waste of time --it is a waste of time 4working hard at my lessons -->to work hard at my lessons 5Lucy felt this --Lucy felt this is 二 riding a bike -->riding bike I soon learned tow years later -->I soon learned that for tow years left his job but -->left his job and to see the world is by bicycle-->to see the world is through bicycle I've met there --> I've met here Though tiring-->although it's tiring very happy to have -->very happy to get

last sunday we went to see a aids patient in hospital.

we bought her some flowers and fruits .she was glad to see

us. many people began to avoid seeing her after she

was infected to hiv virus. a doctor told us that the

hiv virus can not be infected through daily communication

and those suffering from aids should not be looked down upon

we had a talk with the woman and gave her some

cds as gifts . she was moved to tears and promised to be

optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease . we

promise to see her again before we left.

in my opinion,the world will become more beautiful

if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble.