简单英语提问！

请翻译下面句子，谢谢！

请对这个附件提些意见，如果有不合适的地方，我尽快修改。谢谢！（请帮忙翻译）

请大家不要用翻译软件来糊弄我，这是给领导看的，谢谢大家！！！

Please give some advice on this attachment, if there are any inappropriate places, I would amend as soon as possible. Thank you!

额，既然给领导看就客气点：

Would you kindly get through the attach ducument and give some comments.We would rewrite it as soon as possible if any problems exist.Thanks in advance.

Please offer some comments on this attachment, if there are something Improper, I'll perfect it as soon as possible. Thanks

Please give me some advice about the attachment,I'll revise as sonn as possible if there're any Inappropriate place.Thank you!

Please give some advises on this attachment, if there are any inappropriate places, I would revise as soon as possible. Thanks!