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Gone with the wind is one of my favourite classica masterpiece.Every time I read it through,it reminds me of a picture of Vivieb Leigh.she is an famous english actress.I shall never forget her elegance and beauty.Her performance in Gone with the wind even made a true Scarlett O'Hara．She had shown Scarlett's sorrow and tears,strong will and hope to the world.I think the most unforgettable thing is viven's destiny.In autumn,leaves were gone with the wind,and as the world kept turning,her life were gone like the leaves.

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Gone with the wind is one of my favourite classical masterpieces.Every time I read through it,it reminds me of a picture of Vivieb Leigh who is a famous English actress.I shall never forget her elegance and beauty.Her performance in Gone with the wind even made a true Scarlett O'Hara．She had shown Scarlett's sorrow and tears,strong will and hope to the world.I think the most unforgettable thing is viven's destiny.In autumn,leaves were gone with the wind,and as the world kept turning,her life was gone like the leaves.

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