my father will tell me a story to me this night

这句话有何错误?请指出并改正

写错了
应为my father will tell a story to me this night

my father will tell me a story tonight

把 to me 去掉 ， 重复了

this night 格外非正常， tonight 即可

Tell me a story. Tell sb something or Tell sb about something 没有tell sth to sb...

这句话有两种改法： 1.My father will tell me a story this night. 2. My father will tell a story to me this night. tell sth. to sb. tell sb. sth.

很高兴回答你的问题 i was told a story from my father a story was told to me by my father

My father will tell me a story this night. 把 to me 去掉 ， 重复了。

tell me与 to me重复 应为：my father will tell me a story this night