1.We should offer food to the monks every day, go to the temple regularly.
As for me, I wouldn't change, couldn't change even if I wanted to
should，would 这些词后带各自动词一起用的时候和在它们之后接几个动词时，都可以连着用，不需如and之类的连词吗？
2.Why, only the other day I heard a boy shout and scream at his mother.
上句中，句子结构式怎样的，好像没有谓语啊
3.The soil is not difficult to till when there is a lot of rain, but in a bad year, it's not only the ploughs that break but our hearts, too.
对 it's not only the ploughs that break but our hearts, too.不理解，在此not only...but连接的是俩个名词吗？感觉在形式上应该把 ploughs that break 看做是一整个名词，但是意义上却是ploughs break 这样动作的意义。应该怎么分析？
4.Not that I ever heard of
是倒装句吗？means " I didn't hear of that" right？ 但上面那句是不是更地道些？
5.Same thing over here
是省略了谓语吗？又无动词啊
6.How come this shrimp (who's only been in town for a little over a month )gets to be so polular?
上句不看括号内的部分之后，come 和gets 不矛盾吗？怎么分析此句的结构
7.I know you are not supposed to pick up hitchhikers, but it's so far between towns out here, you feel bad passing a person.
对最后一部分you feel bad passing a person不解，它是一个句子，不需用连词与前面连接吗？
8.No, come to think of it,son, I've never seen you children when you first saw the Christmas tree
和上次一样，问什么come to think of it,和I've never seen you children when you first saw the Christmas tree之间也可以不用连词
9.I kept running around over it pretty lively.
lively是形容词，怎么可以修饰kept 动词呢？
10.How fortunate that he had been able to love!
What a pity it was that most city dwellers -myself include-usually miss sights like this.
How could all this have happened in half a day!
感叹句后面还可以接一个完整的句子吗？语法书里都没提到这一点，第三句为什么要把could提前呢？
1.We should offer food to the monks every day, go to the temple regularly.
As for me, I wouldn't change, couldn't change even if I wanted to
你给的两个句子都有问题，第一个句子go之前要加and，同一个句子中不能出现两个谓语，第二个句子couldn't 前应该是个/吧，and连接的是两个句子，需不需要and要视情况而定，你要看should和could之后的动词是及物动词还是不及物动词
2.Why, only the other day I heard a boy shout and scream at his mother.
不知道前面为什么有个why，后面的only the other day做状语 I是主语 hear 是谓语，a boy shout and scream at his mother 是hear的宾语
3.The soil is not difficult to till when there is a lot of rain, but in a bad year, it's not only the ploughs that break but our hearts, too.
不仅是我们的犁折断了，我们的心也碎了，主要考察的是not only...but 结构
4.Not that I ever heard of 是倒装句吗？
是倒装句
5.Same thing over here 是省略了谓语吗？又无动词啊
没有，over here 看做副词，副词可修饰名词、动词、形容词
6.How come this shrimp (who's only been in town for a little over a month )gets to be so polular?上句不看括号内的部分之后，come 和gets 不矛盾吗？
how come 是对后面整个句子提问 get的主语是this shrimp
7.I know you are not supposed to pick up hitchhikers, but it's so far between towns out here, you feel bad passing a person.对最后一部分you feel bad passing a person不解，它是一个句子，不需用连词与前面连接吗？
你感觉不好 错过一个人 passing a person是定语，修饰前you feel bad
8.No, come to think of it,son, I've never seen you children when you first saw the Christmas tree
和上次一样，问什么come to think of it,和I've never seen you children when you first saw the Christmas tree之间也可以不用连词
这里，come to think of it是插入语
9.I kept running around over it pretty lively.lively是形容词，怎么可以修饰kept 动词呢？
lively前还有一个pretty吧，pretty lively才修饰的是kept
10.How fortunate that he had been able to love!
What a pity it was that most city dwellers -myself include-usually miss sights like this.
How could all this have happened in half a day!
感叹句后面还可以接一个完整的句子吗？语法书里都没提到这一点，第三句为什么要把could提前呢？
这三个句子单独成句后才叫感叹句吧，他们本就是完整的句子，你看到感叹号后还有句子吗？
第三句 could提前，倒装嘛，起强调作用