我写的英文诗

大家看看我写的英文诗有没有语法错误！ 谢谢了

Early morning，
no birds
no clouds
The sky lost its color.
Only yellow leaves falling there with a sign,（只有黄叶落下 在那叹息 ）这句对不
perhaps the sky, feel lonely.
I feel so cold,
I know that this autumn will be more and more cold.

Only yellow leaves falling down there with a sign

其他的没有问题

修改： Early morning， no birds no clouds The sky loses its color. Only yellow leaves fall downbwith a sign,（只有黄叶落下 在那叹息 ）这句对不 perhaps the sky, feels lonely. I feel so cold, I know that this autumn will be colder and colder.

good!

能不能把falling 改成fallen，因为前面差个be动词

只是个建议，谢谢！