帮忙看看我这句英语句子有没有什么语法问题

If you give up your own pursuit, It to involve you give up your value of life.

逗号前面没有错误。后面是错的。。你可以这样说，it means that you give up your value of life.

If you give up your own pursuit, It to involve you give up your value of life.

语法：If引导的是条件状语从句，后面应该接一个完整句子作为主句。

it 作为一个形式的主语代替的是If从句所指的整件事，it involves sb. to do sth. 是主句的主干，所以谓语无需用不定式。

改为：

1. If you give up your own pursuit, you will be involved to give up your value of life.

2. If you give up your pursuit, it will involves you to give up your value of life.

两句子均译为：

如果你放弃了自己的追求，那么你也将放弃自己的价值观。

1.your,已经可以表示你的,你自己的,后不用加own

2.It 后不能直接加to,,,,可改为< It involves you to give up your value of life