帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)!

使其成为完美的作文.She can'. She feel happy again;t catch the butterfly,because there is a butterfly coming. 以上是我写的;小猫钓鱼&quot.And she is going to catch the butterfly.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird;大家都知道吧;t have a fish and she feel very sad. Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写? 另外帮我指导下我的英语作文;t catch the bird. Because she feel very sad. Suddenly a bird coming.She don'以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善). But she can',请大家帮忙纠正,&quot

Because she feel very sad. 这句应该用so吧………… 剩下的就不说啥啦………………

不能用ARE GO FISHING是IS GOING FISHING这个词BE的变化多样 可以变成IS ，ARE等等 IS是单数 MOTHER CAT AND BABY CAT 看这个短语是多数还是单数是看AND后那个词是单数还是复数，BABY CAT明显是单数， 然后SUDDENLY A BIRD COMING 如果用在口语是可以理解的但是如果正式使用显然不行 少了动词 该是SUDDENLY THERE IS A BIRD COMING。最后一句SHE DON’T HAVE。。。应该改成SHE DOESN’T。。。SHE 是第三人称单数 基本上这文章太过于口语化 你让我看我看得懂 但是语法很多地方有问题 另外一般故事都应该用过去式来讲述

mother cat and baby cat （go） fishing. suddenly a bird (comes).she (feels) very happy.the baby cat is going to catch the bird. but she can't catch the bird. (so) she feel very sad. she (feels) happy again because there is a but供耿垛际艹宦讹为番力terfly (comes).and she is going to catch the butterfly.she can't catch the butterfly.(at last, the cat can't catch any fish)