帮我检查英语句子~有没有错的~两篇：

1、What do you do at Mid-Autumn Festival?

We look at the moon.We eat moon cakes.We have a special family dinner.Sometimes,we watch TV.We talk about every thing.We are happy.

2、What do you do at Spring Festival?

We favourite festival is Spring Festival.We can eat lots of food.We say "Happy New Year" to everybody.We have Jiaozi.Children can have lots of money.We visit family and friend.We all have a good time.

有错的就帮我指出来~谢谢！