英语 看该句子是否有语病 I learned that you need a few part

英语 看该句子是否有语病 I learned that you need a few part time reporters，which I showed great interest in and is the reason why I worked for the school broadcasting station

I learned that you need a few part-time reporters which I showed great interest in， and that's why I worked for the school broadcasting station.

你好！ 我了解到，你需要一些兼职记者，这是我表现出极大的兴趣和我为学校广播站工作的原因，which最好改为that 仅代表个人观点，不喜勿喷，谢谢。