急求！英语作文：自我介绍！

明天要交了，谁知道！我叫朱樟平，谢了！

Hello everyone. My name is .... I am a student of Grade eight . I am an outgoing , lovely girl and I am so welcomed by my friends and my classmates.
I have a best friend, xiao hai. She is very interesting and lovely too. She often tells funny stories and always make me laugh. We often play together. I like action movies. I think they are exciting and interesting. I often go to the movies with my friends on weekends. I can aslo play the violin and have won many prizes in the competitions. I take violin lessons twice a week. It is a little hard for me but I am very happy , because I have a dream. I want to be a great violinist one day.
Thank you.
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Good morning,I'm glad to be here with you.My name is xxx.Iam xx years old and come from xx Primary School. There are theer members in my family.My dad is a xxx,My mom is a xxx.Iam a happy girl/smart boy.I like piaying PC game.I think it's very interesting.My favourite clss is xxx.Becuase Ican learn a lot.And English is very useful I hope I could speak English well.Thank you.
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