帮我看看这篇高中英语作文，写的乱乱的,有些地方改改

请说说你最想感谢的人是谁，并结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈理由

Thinking my grandma,I remember the occasions we spent together.And she 's the one who I want to show gratitude for most.

 

Since I was born,I began to live with her when parents were working abroad.Grandma cared for me with patience and a warm heart.However I was so naughty that I broke down windows of a neighbour. Then I cried to teel her.But she said nothing .She held my hand tightly and 赔钱给邻居。Although she didn't blame for me,I felt very guilty and was aware of the importance of duty.Being responsible is much more meaningful than crying for mistakes .

 

Before I went to stay with parents,I insisted I stay with this old lady as she's 我最想感激的人.She saw me off and I see the tears in her eyes.

Dear Sir:
I am writing to you to talk about the coming summer camp for two months.In the newspaper,I got the news that you are going to hold an English summer camp.It is so exciting for me,only because I want to improve my English and make more friends in the camp.
My name is xxx,and I am xx years old,studying in grade x.My English is not too bad.I am good at it and I am interested in it,too.But when I use this language,I always make some small mistakes,and my English level is not very high.I wish that the summer camp can help me improve it.Meanwhile,I want to enlarger my vocabulary.
I want to get some detailed information of the camp.How many people will there be in the same room with me?Where are they from?And where is the teacher from?How many hours shall we learn English in the camp every day?What should I take to the camp?Is there internet for us to use in the camp?
I wish that I can get a reply as soon as possible.If so,I will be appreciated.And I will take my brother with me to the camp.


Sincerely yours,XXX