这问这段英文的文法有错误吗?

这问这段英文的文法有错误吗?
B:: The nearby has the supermarket?
(1)Yes Of cause!
Now you turn left, Passes through an intersection and
Turn left again!Walk along this road you will see the
{地点},across the street,go along the road you will
See the supermarket in you left side!The name call {ROYAL}’
This is the biggest supermarket in macau..
macau’s people supermarket!
(2)The tourist can not find the supermarket in finally,we do not know.
In fact,out are tourist too..
Because in January of 23,we move into this new school..
Have a new environment..
We need some time to know new school..
I hope we can more than to understand our new environment!
(3)OH!Is it consisted of 3 parts? Are there included Macao Art Museum,Handover Gifts Museum of Macao and Macao Cultural Center?
同学给的明天会话的对白.. 一直觉得文法有点问题
麻烦指导一下有没有错误

The nearby has the supermarket?
这句不能这么说的.如果要问附近有超市的话,可以用“Is there a supermarket nearby?”
of course~不是cause
The name call {ROYAL}’应该是called
The tourist can not find the supermarket in finally那个finally前面的in去掉,直接就finally或者改成in the end.
不过看这个的意思,你们是想说“我们不知道游客最后是否能找到超市”吗?如果是这个意思的话,可以说：“we don't know whether the tourist can find the supermarket finally or not”
In fact,WE are tourist too..
in January of 23中的of 去掉.in要改成on 后面的move时态要换一下.用过去式 moved
第二段的话,给你重新整理了一下：
we don't know whether the tourist can find the supermarket finally or not,because we are tourist,too.we just came to this new school on January 23th .we have a new environment,so we need some more time to know our new school.I hope that we can know more about our new environment.