英文文章纠错,First swimming in the seasideSummer holiday

英文文章纠错,First swimming in the seasideSummer holiday

错误多,分值有点少哟!①题目错：First Swimming in the Sea（注意什么词该大小写）②Summer holidays has been arriving at改为：Summer holiday has began ,I had been expecting that day for a long time.不好意思,后面看不大懂======以下答案可供参考======供参考答案1:题目不对，seaside是海边海滨，是土~~要么直接用sea 或者用shallow sea也行错误是有点多 太长了供参考答案2:“First swimming in the seasideSummer holidays has been arriving at , I have been expecting that day to swim for to study of the seaside.This has arrived at one day , my state of mind has been very strained, think that ocean is with waters raging be still calm , still piling up one tier small wave after another. Arrive in that time! It truns out that ocean is boundless. But I what to be able to afford no consideration to , running away toward ocean, have not run having been drowned to the billows water that I am moved towards in part by the surge, I not having been daunted by ocean , still running away toward ocean, I prepare to jump the sea moment, thinks of: Can I drop into ocean going to ? Really I away go in. Because of I am incapable swim for. Mother has seen me , has adopted a baby up me immediately. And ask me: Can you swim for ? I said I can not swim for . Mother says: Come t

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