My Dream Job
I 'm going to be a reporter.Becasea I like talking with people .Is very interesting,right?And I'm going to write artcles for magazines and newspapers.When I'm finishing go to hight school,I'm going to Beijing and go to university.Next,I want to work in a TV tation and travel all over the word.
My Dream Job
I'd like to be a reporter.Becasea I like talking with people .It is very interesting,right?And I'm going to write artcles for magazines and newspapers.When I finish my senior school,I'm going to Beijing and goattend university.Then,I want to work in a TV tation and travel all over the word. 里面的逻辑关系有点模糊，连词用的也不是很好。这是个人水平所及，望有助于你....
because 打错了
It is very interesting,right?
When I'm finishing go to hight school 改成 When I finish hight school 这是一个时间状语从句，所以从句中要用一般现在时表一般将来时。
TV后面应该是station 。
谢谢采纳！~
My Dream Job
I 'm going to be a reporter because like talking with people .It is very interesting,right ? And I'm going to write artcles for magazines and newspapers. When I have finished my high school, I'm going to Beijing and study in a university there. Next, I want to work in a TV station and travel all over the word.
只帮你改了基本文法的错误
没有署名