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I met my friends at the bus stop.The no.1 bus left at around eight o'clock.
Shortly,we arrived at the city park.It was a very sunny day.We saw many pigeons there,and we fed them with the bread we brought with us.We shouted and jumped around,we also took photos together.
We had a picnic at noon.I rolled out the blanket I had,my friends and I sat on it,we shared the food we all had.
In the afternoon,some of us got a little bit tired,so we sat on the blanket and we sang,the others danced with the song.
At around 4:30 pm we started to go back to the bus stop and tried to catch the bus home.