书面表达，共15分。请根据下面的提示词，描述你的房间。1. schoolbag,on,bed2. computer,on desk 3. dog,under,chair 4. co

书面表达，共15分。
请根据下面的提示词，描述你的房间。
1. schoolbag,on,bed
2. computer,on desk
3. dog,under,chair
4. computer,on,desk
5. books,in,bookcase
This is my room.



This is my room. You can see a schoolbag on my bed. A dog is under the chair. On the desk,you can see a computer on it. I often play games on it. Beside the desk , it’s a bookcase. There are some books on it. I love my room very much.

(答案→)This is my room. You can see a schoolbag on my bed. A dog is under the chair. On the desk,you can see a computer on it. I often play games on it. Beside the desk , it’s a bookcase. There are some books on it. I love my room very much. 解析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要用第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是系表结构及there be句型等的使用。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对我的房间有了一个比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。

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