请以My best friend为题，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，内容提示如下。我最好的朋友叫Max；戴小而圆的眼镜，幽默，有耐心，他还……；在混合学校学习，是个尖子生，最擅长数

请以My best friend为题，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，内容提示如下。
我最好的朋友叫Max；
戴小而圆的眼镜，幽默，有耐心，他还……；
在混合学校学习，是个尖子生，最擅长数学和英语；
非常痴迷自己动手做东西，曾自己制作音乐盒作为生日礼物送给他的妈妈。
注意：
短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
第2要点的内容须用1-2句展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
标题和第一要点已给出，不计入总词数。
My best friend
My best friend is Max.




My best friend is Max. He wears small round glasses. He is humorous and patient. He is also helpful. He often gives his seat on the bus to someone in need. He studies in a mixed school. He is a top student. He is the best at Maths and English. He is crazy about “DIY”.Once he made his mother a music box by himself as a birthday present. It made his mother very happy.

(答案→)My best friend is Max. He wears small round glasses. He is humorous and patient. He is also helpful. He often gives his seat on the bus to someone in need. He studies in a mixed school. He is a top student. He is the best at Maths and English. He is crazy about “DIY”.Once he made his mother a music box by himself as a birthday present. It made his mother very happy. 解析：本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真审题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求写一篇短文，介绍自己最好的朋友Max。应该用第三人称做主语。时态是一般现在时。写作前写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还恰当地运用了些短语和句式，如be good at ;make sb +adj等等。

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