帮我把这段文字翻译成英文

帮我把这段文字翻译成英文

Hello,everybody!
My name is ，from daqing city of Heilongjiang province , a famous petroleum city. I have many hobbies, such as basketball, listening to music and surfing on the Internet. My favorite sports star is Yaoming whose fighting spirit deserves our respect.

When I was stil a child, I hope i can be a basketball player, but the reality is always far from the ideal. Now, if im to be admitted to the medical school, I will study hard to become a good doctor, a useful man to the society.

Holle ,everyone.I'm ***.I'm from Hei Lonjiang.I have a lot of habits.For example,play basketball,listen to muics and surf the Internet.My favorite star is Yao Ming.He is very hard.下面我无能为力了

Hello,everybody!
My name is ，from daqing city of Heilongjiang province , a famous petroleum city. I have many hobbies, such as basketball, listening to music and surfing on the Internet. My favorite sports star is Yaoming whose fighting spirit deserves our respect.
My English level is not high, hope in the teachers and students can help improve, through the band 4 examination, later use English to do more things.

Hello, everyone. I'm***, from Daqing City of Heilongjiang Province, which is famous for its petroleum. I have lots of hobbies, like playing basketball, listening music, Surfing on the internet. Yaoming is my favourive sports star. He is our model since he is a hard-working man. I wanted to be a basketball play when I was young. However, reality is far from the ideal. I will try my best to be a good doctor once I am in medical college. And be a man, helpful to society.

My English proficiency is not good. I hope it can be improved with teachers and classmates' help and pass the CET-4. I will use English more in daily life in the future.

（With teachers' guidance and classmates' help, I will work hard to enhance my English and pass the CET-4. I will use English more in daily life in the future.）

(CET--College English Test)

老实说，补充部分的翻译我改了很多遍。因为我觉得英文水平的提高不只是靠其他人的帮助，还要自己用功。（）部分是我根据你大概所表达的意思改的。
还有，这是我自己翻译的，有不足之处请多多包涵。

Hello everybody, my name is ***, I come from Daqing City, Heilongjiang Province, a famous oil-industry city. I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, listening to music and surfing the Internet. The sports star I like most is Yao Ming, his efforts spirit is worth people studying.
When I was a child, I hoped to become a basketball player, but it always has distance between ideal and reality. After admitted by a medical school, I will work hard to become a good doctor and make myself a useful person in society.