英语作文,大侠帮忙改改

英语作文,大侠帮忙改改
Should the university campus be open to tourists
Nowadays,with the development of tourist industry,the top university campus are becoming a new hot tourist attraction.Different people have different opinions about whether the university campus should be open to tourists.
Some people hold the view that the university campus should be open to tourists for at least 2 reasons.For one thing,the income of entrance tickets can beautify the university`s enviroment.For another thing,the university`s culture which have both an ancient civilization and advanced science and technology.
Nevertheless,quite a lot people are against the view.At first,tourists who left the rubbish may destory the university`s enviroment.In addition,the nomal lives and studies of students will be disturbed.
Well goes an old saying:every coin has two sides.As far as I am concerned,the university campus shoule be open to tourists in vacation will solve the problem.

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Should university campuses be open to tourists
Nowadays,with the development of travelling,top university campuses are becoming new hot tourist attractions.Different people have different ideas of whether the university campus should be open to tourists.
Some people think that the university campus should be open to tourists for at least 2 reasons.On one hand,the income of entrance tickets can beautify the university`s enviroment.On the other hand,the culture of the university has ancient civilization and advanced science and technology.
Nevertheless,quite a lot people are against that.First,the rubbish which the tourists left may harm the enviroment of university .In addition,the nomal life and study of students will be disturbed by the tourists.
As an old saying goes well:every coin has two sides.As far as I am concerned,the university campuses shoule be open to the tourists in vacation.The problems will be solved.