【English diary】求语法与词汇修改!

【English diary】求语法与词汇修改!
I need support from my family.But my father always seems sad and it may because of me.But I don't know if I think too much.Several years ago,my father have praised that his colleague's daughter is too hard in study to turn on the computer.The girl have passed into a key university.I am sad.I often ask my father what he is thinking about.But he always wouldn't told me.
我上面要表达的是：
我需要家人的支持.但我的爸爸看上去似乎挺伤心的,可能是因为我的缘故.但我不知道是不是我想太多了.几年前,我爸爸曾夸奖她的同事的女儿因为太用功学习连电脑都不知道要怎么开.那个女孩已经考入一所重点大学.我很伤心.我经常问我爸爸他在想什么.但是他却总是不告诉我.
求语法与词汇修改!谢谢热于助人的你们!

1. I need support from my family .need后面加个the
2.I need support from my family,family后面不要句号,换逗号,然后But的 B改成小写
3. But I don't know if I think too much, if 换成weather
4.my father have praised that ,have 换成had
5.The girl have passed into 把passed改成got
6..But he always wouldn't told me.后面加个anything
再问： ③为什么if 要换成weather？
再答： 以后这俩你尽量用weather，if很受限制的，而你这句话后面省略了 or not 不是吗，weather or not 才是是否