可以帮我改一下英语作文吗？

as we know the fiu spread easily among people,we should do our best to fight it.every moring,we should do some exercise to keep healthy,we must often open the windows to keep the air fresh,you had batter do not go to crowded places I often clean my room and change my clothes often.we should drink more biled water and eat healthy food.and you must not stay up rest is necessary,because too much work will make us tired.

人称的问题最大。之前用的主语是we，而后‘we must often open the windows to keep the air fresh,you had batter do not go to crowded places I often clean my room and change my clothes often.’出现三个人称指代。按照中文翻译是没错的，不过还是应该统一到we的人称上。语句都可以用we should better do sth...

and you must not stay up rest is necessary.这句子中间应该断开。 you must not stay up, for having enough rest is necessary.

其他基本还OK。简单句比较多，建议可以考虑来点复杂句式

As we know, the flu spreads easily among people.We should do our best to fight against it.Every moring,we should do some exercise to keep healthy.We must open the windows more often to keep the air fresh. We had better not go to the crowded places. We should keep our room clean and change our clothes often.We should drink more boiled water and eat healthier food.We must not stay up. It is good and necessary to have enough sleep.Because too much work will make us tired and feel sick.

We know that a stream can easily spread among people, we should do our best to strive for clean, we should do some exercise to maintain health, we must always open the windows to keep the air fresh, you should never go to crowded places but also to regularly clean the room , clean my clothes should drink more water and eat vegetables, try not to stay up all night rest is necessary because too much work so that we Fatigue

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