谁能帮我检查这篇英语作文啊,如果无错小弟必有重谢

谁能帮我检查这篇英语作文啊,如果无错小弟必有重谢
The Commander Fort Henry of the Fort
Henry was very angrily,he accuse Ashley is accomplice.Ashley was Imprisoned for 8
hour.Ashley
employ John for his lawye.
Henry Dundas employ
Chief Justice of Canada Christopher Haig Germain.But in the end,justice is Victory.he strive
for 200 silver dollars as compensation for Ashley.
In the 1844,John
win the election very easy,and he join the legislature.But now,The Western Canada and Eastern Canada fall into conflict.Political activities and Religious bigotry growing more and more.The govement
was overthrown,and the society almost can not develop.But in the 1854 ,Johnjoint Tory,French Canadian moderates and
Baldwin's reformist,and built the new govement.
In 1891,John is
76-year-old,and he face his last election.The last few days of the
election campaign,he get ill very sudden,but he won the victory of the
election.After two months,he
died for apoplexy.after John died

这篇英文作文很乱.我试图帮你把句子整得通顺一点.
Henry was very angry and accused Ashley of being an accomplice.Ashley was imprisoned for eight hours,and she employed John as his lawyer.Henry Dundas employed the Chief Justice of Canada,Christopher Haig Germain.In the end,justice won and John stroved for 200 silver dollars as compensation for Ashley.
In 1844,John won the election very easily and joined the legislature.However,Western Canada and Eastern Canada fell into conflict.Political activities and religious bigotry grew and the government was overthrown; society almost came to a standstill.In 1854,Johnjoint Tory,a French Canadian and Baldwin's reformist,rebuilt the government.
In 1891,John was 76 years old and faced his last election.During the last few days of the election campaign,he got ill very suddenly but he still won the election.Two months later,John died of apoplexy.
现在句子通顺多了,也没有语法错误了.
♥ 自己认真修改的,应该比较地道,
再问： 能不能把英文版发到我邮箱里[email protected]
再答： 已发。
再问： 发了么？
再答： 发了。
再问： 我说的是完整版啊，这里没法发完全版啊
再答： 什么完整版？我不知道你指的完整版是什么？
再问： 你给我邮箱，我给你发完整版。整篇文章修改，然后发给我，不长，求准确，今天晚上7点之前给我成不，总量也就是这些的两倍长
再答： 我的邮箱私信给你了。