谁能改改我的作文

谁能改改我的作文

Everyone has his own hobby. I have a hobby as well. My hobby is computer programming.

I think that programming is challenging. Although it forces you to think over and over and ultimately racks your brain; I find it interesting. If you make a tiny program in advance, then compile and run it, many difficult works can be done easier. All the instructions can be executed automatically. You are the leader in the program. You design and order the computer what to do it next. So programming is about active learning.

Also programming can foster your independent learning. You must try to find an answer yourself, and never rely on anybody else. The process you are exploring is the process when you are improving yourself. Bit by bit, your logic thinking method will be improved. (我认为后面还应该加一句总结,类似: so I love computer programming.来点题)

我改的都是语法~原来改的地方有下滑线的，结果显示不出来 -_-;

computer programming-- computer engeneering
Many difficult work ---lot's of work
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