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now i'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation ,of which i worked like a guide in a travel agency. the work was interesting but tired.i think it was helpful to work this holiday.it was the first time that i have earned money on my own. i've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. i used to keep on ask them for money,but now i 'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. i 've learn how to get along well with others.what's worse,i've gained some working and social experience and i have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks. all these willbe good for my future.in a word, i had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation
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1.of 去掉 2.like改为as 3.tired改为tiring 4.for去掉 5.ask改为asking
6.parent改为parents 7.learn改为learned 8.worse改为more 9.something 后加that
10.the改为a
now i'd like to tell you something about my part-time job (in) this summer vacation ,of which i worked (as) a guide in a travel agency. the work was (interested) but tired.i think it was helpful to work (in) this holiday.it was the first time that i have earned money (by) my own. i've come to understand how hard my parents work to support () the family. i (was) used to keep on ask them for money,but now i 'll never (wasting) money and (learning) to share worry with my parent. i 've (learnt) how to get along well with others.what's (more),i've gained some working and social experience and i have learnt something can't be learnt from (the） textbooks. all these willbe good for my future.in a word, i had (a) the wonderful and valuable summer vacation