我写了篇英语作文,谁帮我改改?要求是：You have read an article in a m

我写了篇英语作文,谁帮我改改?要求是：You have read an article in a m

Dear editor:I have read an article in your magazine which states,” Economic development will inevitably generate industrial waste which in turn will cause pollution to the living environment.Economic prosperity and a clean environment cannot coexist.You have to make choice between the two.However,I do not quite agree with this statement.In my opinion,economic prosperity and a clean environment can coexist.As we know,in Singapore,the country has economic prosperity,as well a clean environment.The government made great efforts towards pollution problems.Any individuals or a company let entreated industrial waste pollute the river or sea will get heavily punished,the punishment includes fine of large sum of money even imprisonment.There is also a tax implemented to the industries which generate pollutions,Government should guide investor to build less or even no polluted factories.There should be more encouragement of developing service-oriented tertiary industry,such as tourism,catering industry etc.The country should also develop new industry of clean energy,such as solar,wind and hydropower,electric car manufacture and so on.This can do well to our economic prosperity; also i

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