英语短文改错，Ladies and gentlemen,attention,please

Ladies and gentlemen,attention,please.Because the terrible weather,we have to exchange some of our plans.The airport will be close for about 12 hours.We are very sory.Flight 1360 from Tokyo will be late for 5 hours and the Flight 7510 to Seattle will be delaying 12 hours.We will provide free food and hotel service with you.The tourist flight to Hong Kong will take on at Hilton Airport or a bus will take you there not later than one hour.Thank you.

Ladies and gentlemen, attention, please. 　　Because of the terrible weather, we have to change some of our planes. The airport will be closed for about 12 hours. We are very sorry. 　　Flight 1360 from Tokyo will be late for five hours and flight 7510 to Seattle will be late for 12 hours and we provide free food and hotel service for the passengers of the flight. 　　The tourist flight to Hong Kong will take off at Hilton Airport. A bus will take you there one hour later. 　　Thank you! 　　女士们，先生们，请注意。 　　由于恶劣的天气，我们必须改变我们一些飞行计划。机场将关闭约12小时。对此，我们感到非常抱歉。 　　飞往东京的1360次航班将要晚点5小时，飞往西雅图的7510航班将晚点12小时，我们将为这些航班的旅客提供免费的餐饮和酒店服务。 　　飞往香港的游客请转至希尔顿机场起飞，一小时后的机场巴士将带您前往。 　　谢谢！

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