假设你叫Jim Green, 请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇自我介绍的短文（提示内容必须写完，文中不能出现自己的真实名字，字数50个左右）。Name: Jim Green.Phone

假设你叫Jim Green, 请根据下表提供的信息，写一篇自我介绍的短文（提示内容必须写完，文中不能出现自己的真实名字，字数50个左右）。
Name: Jim Green.
Phone number: 341—6547
Friend: Mike
Pencil box(blue): in the schoolbag
Ruler(yellow): on the desk
Hello, everyone. My name is Jim Green. I am a boy. My phone number is 341—6547. I have a friend. His name is Mike. He is also a boy. I like him very much. We are in the same school. I have a pencil box. It is blue. It is in the schoolbag. And I have a ruler. It is yellow. It is on the desk.

(答案→)Hello, everyone. My name is Jim Green. I am a boy. My phone number is 341—6547. I have a friend. His name is Mike. He is also a boy. I like him very much. We are in the same school. I have a pencil box. It is blue. It is in the schoolbag. And I have a ruler. It is yellow. It is on the desk. 解析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照表格中的提示信息写一篇自我介绍，我们要用简单的英语把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含“我”的姓名、电话号码、好友马克、以及拥有的文具铅笔盒和尺子的基本信息进行简单介绍，以及文具的颜色和存放位置交代清楚。在行文中要把这些内容准确地表达清楚。注意字数的要求，可对内容做适当发挥，但是对于初一的学生不提倡些篇幅过长的文章，以免出现较多的语法错误。【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了“我”的基本信息，并且并包含了图表中所列举的全部信息。其中代词的使用准确、介词短语运用恰当，介绍时条理清晰，有条不紊，显示了习作者较扎实的写作基本功。

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