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请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。You are discussing the following picture with your classmates. Now y

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请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your classmates. Now you are telling them how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
提示词:电动扶梯 escalatorI think the picture is trying to tell us that we should not follow others blindly. As you can see, crowds of people are waiting to take the escalator while a man holding bags is walking upstairs on the steps. It is obvious that the man is closer to the destination than most people on the escalator, because these people fail to notice the crowded situation and still believe it is more convenient and energy-saving. Actually, if they do not blindly follow others, they can walk upstairs quickly as well.
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(答案→)I think the picture is trying to tell us that we should not follow others blindly. As you can see, crowds of people are waiting to take the escalator while a man holding bags is walking upstairs on the steps. It is obvious that the man is closer to the destination than most people on the escalator, because these people fail to notice the crowded situation and still believe it is more convenient and energy-saving. Actually, if they do not blindly follow others, they can walk upstairs quickly as well. 解析:这是一篇看图作文,要求根据下面提示,写一篇短文。写作时要抓住图画的内容也要从图画的表面看到它深层的含义,可以结合所给的提示进行论述,也可以适当添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】I think the picture is trying to tell us that we should not follow others blindly. 这句话用了宾语从句,As you can see, crowds of people are waiting to take the escalator while a man holding bags is walking upstairs on the steps.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, It is obvious that the man is closer to the destination than most people on the escalator, because these people fail to notice the crowded situation and still believe it is more convenient and energy-saving.这句话用了it做形式主语,和原因状语从句, We often choose to follow others instead of making a wiser choice after analyzing our situation. 这句话用了动名词, we may waste a lot of time and energy without achieving our goals. 范文中还使用了Actually ,As a result, Therefore,这样的关联词,使文章更加连贯。
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