短文改错（共8小题；每小题0.5分, 满分4分）下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。删除

短文改错（共8小题；每小题0.5分, 满分4分）
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并往该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改8处, 多者（从第9处起）不计分
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Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meeting. It was held on Oct.6, when was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do our best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receive your letter.when 改which

(答案→)when 改which 解析：【小题1】when 改which 本句是一个定语从句，which指代前面的先行词Oct.6在句中作主语，而when在句中只能做状语。【小题2】attend改attending 本句中的现在分词短语attending it做定语修饰名词1,000 students and teachers，主要是因为两者之间存在着主动关系。【小题3】finish改finished本文的基本时态是一般过去时，所以这里使用过去式。【小题4】去掉第二个in 动词break打破，是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不需要使用介词.【小题5】success前加a 或successful 本句中可以使用success指一件成功的事情，前面加a；也可以用形容词successful在句中作表语。【小题6】winner改winners 固定搭配one of后面要接可数名词复数形式，表示“…之一”。【小题7】that改what　本句是一个宾语从句，what引导起这个宾语从句，在句中作为动词done的宾语。【小题8】receive改receiving 本句中的to是一个介词，后面要接动名词doing的形式。

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