A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his r

A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”
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4）在答题卡上作答。Nowadays, more and more young people are always on the phone, sleeping, out with their friends, or in their rooms closing the doors. What they do make their parents feel deep sad and lonely.

(答案→)Nowadays, more and more young people are always on the phone, sleeping, out with their friends, or in their rooms closing the doors. What they do make their parents feel deep sad and lonely. 解析：开放式作文：1. 更全面的考查了学生的认知方式和思维能力。2. 进一步释放了学生的想象力和英语语言的表达能力。3. 试题体现对现实的关注，要求学生有一定的生活阅历，引领学生关注社会，思考人生。此开放作文贴近学生生活。基础差的考生容易上手，基础好的学生则有足够发挥空间。这类作文学生都能动手写作，但是如果要得高分，以下几个因素缺一不可：好的开头结尾、行文逻辑清晰、高级词汇及句型的使用、漂亮的书写和卷面。

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