英语翻译你说我可以将来以一名转校生的身份进入XXX大学,我觉得这个理由很荒唐.如果现在不录取我,以后

英语翻译你说我可以将来以一名转校生的身份进入XXX大学,我觉得这个理由很荒唐.如果现在不录取我,以后

与其单纯发泄不满,倒不如利用这个机会要求他们重新考虑你的申请.考虑一下使用下面的版本吧,这样哪怕不成功,也好歹给他们留下一个好的印象,也充分说明你确实很想去那所大学.Dear Mr./Ms. XXX,I am writing to respectfully ask for reconsideration of my application to University XXX. I am aware of the possibility of attending the university as a transfer student in the future as mentioned in your letter. However, I want to spend a full four years in the university, and I would be proud to have University XXX as my alma mater. As you can see from my application, I have been attending quality schools ever since kindergarten, and I have gone through an extremely competitive process to proceed to the best high school in the city. My goal has always been to obatin education of the best quality, and that is why that I have strong hope to obtain college education at University XXX. I feel that my academic strength can be proven through the records in my application, but as a person I have a lot more to offer than good grades and a diverse background. [这里加上几句,重点突出你的优势--学习和国际背景以外的,例如兴趣爱好或者课余活动甚至梦想] I am aspired to join the Star Club, and to share my ideas with all its intelligent members.Again, please reconsider my application. I look forward to start my first year at University XXX. Thank you!Sincerely yours,XXX 作为一个多次被各种各样的好大学拒绝的留学生,我充分理解你的心情.从本科开始我在美帝的高等教育系统里已经呆了将近6年了,也算是有一点心得吧.其他国家的大学不了解,但据我所知的,美国大学看留学生的时候除了成绩要好（这点你显然已经满足了）,还有额外的例如课外活动或者别的什么经历,让这个申请者变得跟其他优秀学生不同.从这个方面入手,用这个机会再去争取一次好了.最后从一个多管闲事的比你年龄大很多的人的角度说一句：气生完就好,别让他们有理由把你当成个空有傲气的小孩.

和我的回答一样，看来我也对了