帮忙看看句子有没有句法错误

帮忙看看句子有没有句法错误

it is of consideration attraction
两个名词不能乱放在一起除非是特殊情况. 这个句形可以这样写: "it is of great humour to..." 又例如 "it is of great interest to..." 一个形容词加一个名词.

attraction/attractive to observe 意思不很明确-----至少这样子写不常见. 不妨考虑用provocative(发人深省), hilarious(可笑), amusing(逗人发笑), 之类.

observe in 如果要强调是仔细看的话, 该用 observe into 或 look into

in the picture, two people...中间应为冒号而不是逗号.

two people are setting here 中间are应该略去? 另个人认为应用there而不是here.

还有是an ATM

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所以呢我会建议如下:
it is of considerable interest to look into this picture: two people setting there, sweating all over, serving as an ATM for their grown-up son.

it is provoking to look into this image: two people setting there, sweating all over, serving as an ATM for their grown-up son.追问it is of considerable interest to observe in this picture that two people are setting there, sweating all over, serving as an ATM for their grown-up son.这样可以吗

错句。首先，从语义来看，前面的of consideration attraction写得不太好，不地道，不知所云。后面的two peopel.....句子松散，two peple are setting，有自己的谓语动词，可前面已有了句子，没有任何连词，换句话说，整个句子有两个谓语了，这就是句法出错了。