英语短文改错(10处，每句最多有两处）

Several days before,a few of my friend and I went on a picnic on the beach of the Jialing River.It is about five miles far from the city.We arrived that place in the morning.Most of us go swimming immediately.While in the water,we played an interesting game.Those which were on the beach had some other activity.Some of them even sang and danced happy.There were still others who were interested in nothing,except picked beautiful stones.In the evening,we returned home.How a happy day it was!

Several days ago,A few of my friends and I went on a picnic on the beach of the Jialing River.It was about five miles far from the city.We arrived at that place in the morning.Most of us went swimming immediately.While in the water,we played an interesting game.Those who were on the beach had some other activities.Some of them even sang and danced happily.There were still others who were interested in nothing,except picking beautiful stones.In the evening,we returned home.What a happy day it was!

Several days before,a few of my friends and I went on a picnic on the beach of the Jialing River.It was about five miles far from the city.We arrived that place in the morning.Most of us went swimming immediately.While in the water,we played an interesting game.Those who were on the beach had some other activities.Some of them even sang and danced happily.There were still others who were interested in nothing,except picking beautiful stones.In the evening,we returned home.What a happy day it was!

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