Dear Nick,I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And 1.I think you

Dear Nick,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And 1.
I think you made a wise choice to travel here. Sichuan province is 2.
rich in attractions and enjoys many famous places of interests. 3.
Jiu Zhaigou is well known for it’s beautiful lakes, of which 4.
the water is clear but looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ 5.
imagination .Another attraction is Dujiangyan which was built 6.
2000 years ago and was still playing an important in irragation 7.
today. Besides, the nice weather a can make your trip much 8.
enjoyable. I am sure that you have a good time. 9.
I am looking forward to your come. 10. 1. in 改为on

(答案→)1. in 改为on 解析： 1. 具体日期前面介词应为on2. 整个文章时态是一般时态3. a place of interest 中interest是抽象名词，没有复数4. 形容词性物主代词5. 应该是并列关系6. 正确7. 因为句子后面是today，所以用现在时8. 或much后面加more9. 表示将来时态10.做to的宾语

这个问题我还想问问老师呢