写一篇Online school【网校】 ，写关于网校的三个好处， 日期是十月十三号， 然后。。老

写一篇Online school【网校】 ，写关于网校的三个好处， 日期是十月十三号， 然后。。老

With the widespread of computer, more and more people tend to use Internet to get information and learn knowledge, especially, many educational agent use online class to teacher their students. Many people think it is convenient for students to obtain knowledge by online education and can save students lots of time spending on traveling between home and school. Some people think students can’t focus on studying by online education. In my opinion, we can benefit a lot by online education.
随着电脑的普及，越来越多的人倾向于用互联网来获取信息和知识，特别是许多的教育机构会用到网络教育来教育他们的学生。许多人认为网络教育获取知识很方便，也会节省学生花费在往返于学校和家之间的时间。一些人认为网络教育下的学生不能够集中注意力学习。就我看来。通过网络教育，我们受益良多。
Firstly, online education can save students time. We all know that traditional education require students to go to school or certain place to obtain knowledge. Therefore, students have to spend lots of time on travel between home and school. However, online education can save students lots of time. They don’t have to spend time on traveling to school and home.
第一，网络教育可以节省学生的时间。我们都知道传统教育要求学生必须到学校或者一个固定的场所接受教育。因此，学生不得不花费在往返于学校和家庭之间很多时间。但是，网络教育可以让学生节省很多时间。学生不必花费很多时间在往返于学校和家庭之间的路途上。
Secondly, students can get more knowledge by online education. Students can search for their study materials immediately during break time by Internet. While by traditional education, students can’t find any useful resource in school for they have no access to get the relative knowledge by their limited books.
第二，学生通过网络教育可以得到更多的知识。学生可以再课余时间利用网络搜寻他们需要的学习材料。但是就传统教育来说，学生不能够在学校的时候得到一些有用的信息因为他们不能从有限的书本上获取一些相关的知识。
Thirdlt, online education not only can save much time, but it can help students get more knowledge than traditional education.
第三，网络教育不仅能节省很多时间，同时也能够帮助学生获得比传统教育更多的知识。追问时间那地点怎么加上谢啦谢啦