阅读了上面的这篇“The students’ vacation plan”之后，结合以下信息写一篇短文：你们一家人打算1月20号坐飞机去北京度寒假，用时大约3小时；停留1个星期；去

阅读了上面的这篇“The students’ vacation plan”之后，结合以下信息写一篇短文：
你们一家人打算1月20号坐飞机去北京度寒假，用时大约3小时；停留1个星期；去长城等地方参观、照相；还会认识一些新朋友；北京很美、食物美味、人也好；你们将在那里度过一个愉快的假期。
作文要求：
1、不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2、内容必须具体、合理；语句连贯；条理清楚 3、词数80左右。


I am going to Beijing for winter vacation wih my family this year.We are leaving for Beijing on January 20th by air.It will take us over 3 hours to get there.And we’re going to stay there for a week.Beijing is the capital of China and it’s a beautiful city.We are going to the Great wall,the Summer Palace and many other interesting places.What’s more,we’re going to take a lot of photos and make new friends there.The food there is delicious and the people there are also friendly.We believe that we will have a good time there.

(答案→)I am going to Beijing for winter vacation wih my family this year.We are leaving for Beijing on January 20th by air.It will take us over 3 hours to get there.And we’re going to stay there for a week.Beijing is the capital of China and it’s a beautiful city.We are going to the Great wall,the Summer Palace and many other interesting places.What’s more,we’re going to take a lot of photos and make new friends there.The food there is delicious and the people there are also friendly.We believe that we will have a good time there. 解析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: It will take us over 3 hours to get there.到达那里将花费我们大约三个小时的时间。the capital of China中国的首都。we’re going to take a lot of photos and make new friends there.我们打算拍许多照片并结交一些朋友。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

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