请问这篇英文哪儿有错

I am very glad that you wrote me as a Chinese citizen.，you asked me my identity，I am a citizen from Chicago Illinois and I have showed my great interest in all kinds of leadership posts，I am also active in university and associations，I have my faith in faithfulness to my family and work and serving the public。

I believe I can make it now you can get to know lots of my foreign affairs through Google 。Maybe we could not meet each other but thank you for your letter from you a Chinese citizen。

The ordinary life can also be communicated in this way between countries。

I am very glad that you wrote (这里的to可以省略，不懂别乱说) me as a Chinese citizen.，you asked me my identity（me是宾语，my ID 是宾语补足语，这句没错），（接下来是另一个句子，前面应该用句号，没必要用定语从句）I am a citizen from Chicago Illinois and I have showed my（这个my有点多余） great interest in all kinds of leadership posts，I am also active in university and associations，I have my faith in faithfulness to my family and work and serving the public。

I believe I can make it（这里应该断句） now you can get to know lots of my（my如果改成our感觉会好些） foreign affairs through Google 。Maybe we could not meet each other but thank you for your letter from you a Chinese citizen。

The ordinary life can also be communicated in this way between countries（这里用between和不加two是正确的。between表达的是两个之间，既然能表达清楚意思，就没必要加一个多余的two。而among则是在3个或更多国家之间，不符合2个人的情况）。

I am very glad that you wrote to me as a Chinese citizen . You asked me my identity which is a citizen from Chicago Illinois and I have showed my great interest in all kinds of leadership posts . I am also active in university and associations， and I have my faith in faithfulness to my family 、 work and serving the public。

I believe I can make it now and you can get to know lots of my foreign affairs through Google 。Maybe we could not meet each other but thank you for your letter from you ------ a Chinese citizen。The ordinary life can also be communicated in this way between two countries 。 （或者among countries）

是打错标点还是真的不会呢？一个句子不能重复出现很多主语，可以用and 连接。

1 that you wrote me as a

that you wrote to me as a

2you asked me my identity

you asked my identity

3a citizen

a person 直接

4你要表达的是在大学积极。勤于交际

I am also active in university and associations

I am also active and good communication in university

5for your letter from you a Chinese citizen

for your letter as you a Chinese citizen

i can't help crying