英语作文...帮我看看有没有错.. 扣几分啊、

英语作文...帮我看看有没有错.. 扣几分啊、
There are too much pressure because we are studying for the entrance exam.So we have even harder lives than some adults.
But we can also find some happiness while studying hard.
In my spare time,I can always get pleasure because I can do every thing I want to do.
For example,I like playing basketball.It makes me both happy and healthy.What's more,I like reading books with much knowledge.I really enjoy it.
This is my spare time.It's just like a colorful,relaxing and different world for me.

写得一般...如果能看完的帮我纠错吧...

There are too(too 去掉吧,以为有too,读者就会期待你后面解释压力过大的结果) much pressure（on us） because we are（have been） studying （hard） for the national entrance exam.
So we have even harder lives than （those of 原句比较的是lives he adults） some adults.
In my spare time,I can always get pleasure（I feel free好一点,get pleasure读者会想知道从什么地方获得pleasure） because I can do every thing（anything） I want to do.
It makes me （both 去掉） happy and healthy
What's more,I like reading books（which can give me knowledge）