英语改错,包括标点符号使用,时态,拼写...

英语改错,包括标点符号使用,时态,拼写...
The corners on the right are round,not square,and the yard a dark green and has a marble fountain.Water bubbles up from the fountain,making a pleasing sound.It is easy to imagine that the people who live in this house led very enjoyable life.There are maybe eight columns in the front.There are windows,too,the windows are on the first and second floors and are very tall,extending from the floor to above the doors.Above the porch on the first floor there is a balcony.The sidewalk leading to the front door,which is gray and made of wood,is made of stone.There are two little windows in the door.The house looks like a museum,one I saw in a movie,but this house is more interesting than the movie.On the right side of the house there is a funny looking room enclosed in iron,the same material as the fence.It looks like a jail.I'd like to live in this house.

The corners on the right are round,not square,and the yard is (a) dark green and has a marble fountain.Water bubbles up from the fountain,making a pleasing sound.It is easy to imagine that the people who live in this house (led) lead very enjoyable life.There are about (maybe) eight columns in the front.There are windows(,) too,which (the windows) are on the first and second floors and are very tall,extending from the floor to above the doors.Above the porch on the first floor there is a balcony.The sidewalk leading to the front door,which is gray and made of wood,is made of stone.There are two little windows on(in) the door.The house looks like a museum,as what (one) I saw in a movie,but this house is more interesting than that in () the movie.On the right side of the house there is a funny looking room enclosed in iron,the same material as the fence.It looks like a jail.I'd like to live in this house.