帮我写一篇初三书面表达(>^ω^<)...

题目是：假设明天是国庆节，有些外地同学回不了家，你做为班长程林，想邀请他们到你家开个晚会。晚会6：30开始。你家住在朝阳街18号，乘812路公共汽车在终点站下车。你们家在路对面。房子是白色的门，门是红色的，很容易找到。请根据所给信息，给同学们发一封E-mail。词数：80左右

Dear classmates，

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Yours，

Cheng Lin

要求是初三以下或初三的语法 \(^o^)/

dear classmates,
    hello,everyone,i am your class monitor Cheng Ling.i know that some of you can't go home because your home is faraway from our school.tomorrow is National Day,i want all of us to have fun that day,so i decide to hold a evening party at my home.the party will start ar 6:30.my home address is No.18 , Zhaoyang Street,you can take the No.812 bus and get off at the final stop.my home is just opposite from the bus stop.the house is white but the front door is red.so it is easy to find.i hope that you can attend my party and enjoy yourselves at the party.please call  me after you  make up your mind.
looking forward to yout coming.
    yours,
    Cheng Ling