根据自己的一张家庭照片，以My Family为题，介绍你的家人,40词左右。 My FamilyThis is a photo of my familyI have a happ

根据自己的一张家庭照片，以My Family为题，介绍你的家人,40词左右。
My Family




This is a photo of my family．I have a happy family．There are five people in my family．They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and I．The old（年老的） woman is my grandmother．The man is my father．His name is David．He is a teacher．And what about the woman? She is my mother．Her name is Linda．She is very nice．Look at the girl．That’s my sister．She is in a middle school（中学）．Her name is Lucy．

(答案→)This is a photo of my family．I have a happy family．There are five people in my family．They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and I．The old（年老的） woman is my grandmother．The man is my father．His name is David．He is a teacher．And what about the woman? She is my mother．Her name is Linda．She is very nice．Look at the girl．That’s my sister．She is in a middle school（中学）．Her name is Lucy． 解析：本文是学生熟悉的话题，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，介绍自己家人的情况应该用一般现在时。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用连接词。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些短语，在叙述中使用了连接词，使叙述逻辑更为合理，层次更加分明，为文章增色不少.如: is from +地点。来自哪里，very much 非常等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

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